Oh princess , my princess ! where have you gone
I wait for you daily, from dusk till dawn
I miss your broken mirrors , and your teerhi seat
I miss going far away, to try new things to eat
Can I guess the speed , you ever had at max
it was 60 right? , on which other cars relax
do you miss having dhakas , each and every morning
and then being Naraz without giving me any warning
even Amjad never smoked ,while sitting in you
see!! every body knew, you hate cigarette ki boo
Getting your body washed , has always been a pain
But why to worry now, In summer there is more rain
Now my friends are happy, they never have to wait,
Since you aren’t around, I never reach anywhere late.
I miss all that ‘khar khar’ , you used to release
So please come back , oh! please please please please
PS. Uff!! main kit fitna poet hoon!!
8 comments:
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u seem to have some good poetic skills! and this is one of the very few poems i have seen who have proper qafia and radeef, separate for each she'r though!!
great work!! its very funny and the most funny is this stanza..
even amjad never smoked while sitting in you...lol i mean u give so much respect to your shehzadi..im touched!!
fit poem, waqai mein tum "fitna" poet ho
oh.. i meant to say fit.. :) but 'fitna' looks better..
Really the poem is great. I am marveled to know that you can even write poems. It seems that you had a natural flair and appetite for poetry that came out at last. I should have known earlier that another poet besides Kashif is lurking around me. Keep up the good work and please do keep us illuminated often with your literary and scholarly knowledge.
Oh..thanks Naveed.. :) Somebody new praised me after a long time..
HAHAHAHA
:)
i read the poem! i read it! i read it! :)
And i really liked it too!
simple, straight and so girly!
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